tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post3373341910157303746..comments2024-03-25T20:27:04.181-04:00Comments on Alex J. Cavanaugh: Sneak PeakAlex J. Cavanaughhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comBlogger65125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-3907817592104895742010-10-18T06:11:36.600-04:002010-10-18T06:11:36.600-04:00Awesome stuff :D Bring on the 19th! I'll see h...Awesome stuff :D Bring on the 19th! I'll see how us over here in Old Blighty can get our hands on a copy :DJamie Gibbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168603412367448706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-73974337173743588882010-10-07T23:47:59.707-04:002010-10-07T23:47:59.707-04:00Great choice for a teaser post. Looking forward to...Great choice for a teaser post. Looking forward to the 19th.Chuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13676928110297819368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-30328927147448897582010-10-05T21:20:10.469-04:002010-10-05T21:20:10.469-04:00Cinette, thanks!!!!Cinette, thanks!!!!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-37445851415880006882010-10-05T18:34:12.700-04:002010-10-05T18:34:12.700-04:00I ordered my copy today. Can't wait!I ordered my copy today. Can't wait!Cinettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11453731550912619157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-48625191656878691392010-10-05T14:32:55.036-04:002010-10-05T14:32:55.036-04:00Yeah!
I'm so glad you posted this. Got my pump...Yeah!<br />I'm so glad you posted this. Got my pump primed and can't wait for the book...Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-55400879857459652872010-10-05T07:01:23.493-04:002010-10-05T07:01:23.493-04:00Thanks, ladies.
Donna, you can edit all you like,...Thanks, ladies.<br /><br />Donna, you can edit all you like, but my publisher has already done so and this is the finished product.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-18776862629035621282010-10-05T06:38:19.404-04:002010-10-05T06:38:19.404-04:00eeek; blogger is duplicating a bad post. And didn...eeek; blogger is duplicating a bad post. And didn't give me a trash can to erase it. Man o man, I hate this ***** netbook.<br /><br />I'm reverting to paper and pencil.<br /><br />Finagan . . begin again . .<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-40325141653306848562010-10-05T06:30:03.735-04:002010-10-05T06:30:03.735-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-83964029934007119172010-10-05T06:29:52.869-04:002010-10-05T06:29:52.869-04:00I've been critiquing all night; so forgive me ...I've been critiquing all night; so forgive me if I offend:<br /><br />“Adequate run, offered Bassa, his gaze still averted. Should have quotes at the end of "Adequate run," offered Bassa..<br /><br />And: “Yes, sir,” answered Byron, taking a quick breath. “We did perform twenty-seven unique maneuvers during that flight, sir.”<br /><br />He sensed a flash of panic from Trindel, but the feeling was quickly shielded. Bassa’s eyebrows pulled together, reflecting his disapproval of Byron’s unsolicited statement.<br /><br />So, it was Byron that was the "he" in "he sensed a flash of panic"; or was it Trindel? Pov here is unclear.<br /><br />And why is Byron "unable to respond" as "Char punched in the code for the program" when he clearly hears Trindel comment privately "Well, didn’t take you long to annoy Bassa," and Byron replies "Always start at the top, Trindel…"<br /><br />Oh, do I love that line "always start at the top". Such expert character building, masterfully coupled with "Regardless, we’ll ace this run,(") he declared, not bothering to shield his thought."<br /><br />Byron is reckless, confident, yet aware of his actions. I like this hero. He gives me a sense of adventure and risk in this short introduction. Awesome.<br /><br />Rellen states my take on this excerpt: “Yes, he’s damned cocky!” Rellen announced, a smile tugging at his lips. “Boy knows how to push it to the limit, too.”<br /><br />Man; I'm even more excited to have the hard copy of this novel. I like these characters. They have - character.<br /><br />Awesome Alex; thanks for posting this teaser. Hold on; I have to hit the calendar for a payday! Day 19, this book is mine!!<br /><br />Its my birthday month you know; I can spend money anywhere I want :)<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-11782013693718544162010-10-05T00:35:56.779-04:002010-10-05T00:35:56.779-04:00No wonder you're a published author; this was ...No wonder you're a published author; this was great! It had such a manly and cinematic feel to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-52601314272812706702010-10-05T00:15:18.939-04:002010-10-05T00:15:18.939-04:00It was so great! What happens next?It was so great! What happens next?Carolyn V.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15456210036213016603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-14828679102779901242010-10-04T23:18:57.984-04:002010-10-04T23:18:57.984-04:00Ooh.. amazing! I can't wait to see what happe...Ooh.. amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)WritingNuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16326756274887055685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-34830980607990253222010-10-04T23:01:38.917-04:002010-10-04T23:01:38.917-04:00Classic sci-fi, I'm loving it! Thanks for sha...Classic sci-fi, I'm loving it! Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-39164818602380667222010-10-04T19:36:19.928-04:002010-10-04T19:36:19.928-04:00I don’t usually have sci-fi books on my to-read l...I don’t usually have sci-fi books on my to-read list, but from this excerpt it looks like I’ll have to make an exception. I like your characters and I want to see what happens next.Jane Kennedy Suttonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12519340747761460017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-76556612694142998132010-10-04T19:22:05.368-04:002010-10-04T19:22:05.368-04:00Lynda, I don't know!Lynda, I don't know!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-44194198945963371022010-10-04T19:15:24.822-04:002010-10-04T19:15:24.822-04:00Cool Alex - I liked it!!!Cool Alex - I liked it!!!RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-30143182270777320772010-10-04T18:12:51.082-04:002010-10-04T18:12:51.082-04:00Oooh! Definitely tons of tension there, I'm so...Oooh! Definitely tons of tension there, I'm so keen to see how this relationship unfolds and how they work together!Sangu Mandannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464061265952789628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-7652763752735203912010-10-04T17:57:23.529-04:002010-10-04T17:57:23.529-04:00Nice one :) So, will the book be released in Austr...Nice one :) So, will the book be released in Australia on the 19th as well? I bet you are going to say I have to wait...Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-63058602986332085582010-10-04T17:45:38.347-04:002010-10-04T17:45:38.347-04:00Is it the 19th yet? :) Great sneak peek.Is it the 19th yet? :) Great sneak peek.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-67533687933608140472010-10-04T17:38:20.061-04:002010-10-04T17:38:20.061-04:00Mary, that's good - it was the portion I was g...Mary, that's good - it was the portion I was given permission to post!<br /><br />KK - it only gets more intense!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-57565916246421675072010-10-04T17:10:45.684-04:002010-10-04T17:10:45.684-04:00Wish I'd kept on my hormones. Great excerpt!Wish I'd kept on my hormones. Great excerpt!KK Breeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18300974722831848744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-52626063976851969122010-10-04T15:42:45.439-04:002010-10-04T15:42:45.439-04:00Thanks for the sneak peek. :)Thanks for the sneak peek. :)Nicki Elsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11412032684225126973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-30257509876988643482010-10-04T15:01:49.106-04:002010-10-04T15:01:49.106-04:00Oh yeah. So looking forward to devouring this who...Oh yeah. So looking forward to devouring this whole book! Thanks for sharing :)))Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-29498378409837925732010-10-04T14:58:58.413-04:002010-10-04T14:58:58.413-04:00Tidbit! A teeny, tiny tidbit. That's ok I'...Tidbit! A teeny, tiny tidbit. That's ok I'll wait 14 days to get the book.<br />This choice was a great hook, Alex.<br /><a href="http://gigglesandguns.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Mary</a>Mary@GigglesandGunshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350818228268801008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8699262959296846764.post-13608577479348014302010-10-04T14:49:25.592-04:002010-10-04T14:49:25.592-04:00Oh, I like this, Alex. I've met a few Byrons a...Oh, I like this, Alex. I've met a few Byrons and Bassas in my life. This should be a fun read.Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168273312704732896noreply@blogger.com